My Prince Charming – Kabanata 3
Napalapit ng napalapit ang loob ng matanda kay Lyka. para silang tunay na maglola..”Lola maganda ba ang nobya ni sir Matthew? nahihiyang tanong ni Lyka..Ngumiti ang matanda. “ang totoo iha mas maganda ka..sagot ng matanda.”namula ang pisngi ng dalaga” Lola naman..Tumawa ang matanda..”Iha sa totoo lang ayokong si Vanessa ang makatuluyan ng apo ko..pagtagal ng araw at nakilala kita ng husto ..masasabi kong ikaw..ikaw ang gusto ko..sagot ng matanda..”Po?hindi makapaniwala sa sinabi ng matanda..Lola naman alam mo namang para kaming aso’t pusa ie..saka masyado pong antipatiko ang apo ninyo..sagot niya..yun naman ang totoo.”Basta iha, ikaw ang gusyo ko..sabi nito
Gabi na..Hindi parin siya dalawin ng antok.Naglakad lakad muna siya sa hardin..May nakita sya..Hindi sya pwedeng magkamali si Matthew nasa gilid ito ng pool. nakatimpisaw ang mga paa. animoy batang naglalaro.GUsto niya itong lapitan, mkipagkwentuhan..pero nagdadalawang isip siya baka supladuhan lang siya nito. tumalikod siya..matutulog na siya…nagbago na namn ang isip niya..try niyang mkipagkaibigan sa amo niyang suplado..palapit plang siya kinakabahan na siya..Nang makalapit n siya..Hominga muna siya ng malalim..humugot ng lakas ng loob..”Ah sir hindi rin po kayo makatulog? mahina niyang tanong..”Obvious naman di ba?sakkastikong sagot ng binata.Lumunok si Lyka..”Ano bang problema mo?sir..Db maayos namn pakikitingo ko sayo..bakit nangbabastos ka?sigaw ni Lyka.Hindi niya mapigilang maghihinakit dahil kahit pilitin niyang mkipagkasundo dito ay ito ang lumalayo. Tumayo ang binata. Tatalikuran siya. Wag kang bastos sir..” madiing wika ng dalaga..Humarap ang binata..”Hindi mo ba nakikita..miss ayaw kita,,Mahina pero parang kalakas nung dating kay Lyka..Lumunok siya.. Ngunit ayaw niyang magpatalo..”Kung ayaw mo sakin mas ayaw kita..hindi lang antipatiko, atribida at bastos pa..madiing sagot niya. Nagsalubong ang kilay ng binata”Brat girl”’anas nito .Umurong si Lyka ng makitang palapit ang binata…hindi niya alam pool na pala ang uurungan nya.Huli na ng malaman niya yun.dumulas ang paa niya at tuluyan na siyang nahulog sa pool..”Ayyyyyyyyyy tili niya.. huli na..ang nasa isip niya ngayon kung paano umaahon..pero pano?di siya marunong lumangoy..Ipinikit niya ang mata niya…bahala na.
Pagkamulat niya ang kanyang mata. nakahiga na siya sa malambot na kama.ginala niya ang kanyang mata..maganda ang kuwarto..malinis, maayos.maluwang. napakaluwang.kulay skyblue ang pintura nito..panlalake…Agad siyang bumangon..asan siya?Ala siyang maalala kundi ang hulog siya sa pool..nang dahil sa atribida niyang sir..sir? ang ibig sabihin ang sir din niya ang nagligtas sa kanya?bumaba ang tingin niya..iba na ang damit niya..ibig sabihin binihisan siya ng lalaking yun?tumaas ang dugo niya..asan yung bastos na lalaking yun?bumaba siya sa kama..lumaba ng pinto..at doon nalaman niya na my sarili plang living room ang kuwarto nito.napakaluwang at namataan niya ang lalaking mahimbing na natutulog sa sofa..sa halip na magalit siya parang my humaplos sa puso niyatinitigan niya ang binata.para itong anghel na natutulog,.kaamo ang mukha nito.ang guwapo ang labi nito kaysarap sigurong humalik.mapupula ito,hindi siguro naninigarilyo..abala siya sa pagtitig sa lalaki kaya hindi niya namalayang dumilat na ito..nagulat pa siya ng bumangon ito at ngumiti sa kanya..first time niya itong makitang ngumiti..at sa tingin niya lao itong gumandang lalak.doon lang siya nakabawi..”Anong nginingiti mo jan ha .hindi ka lang pla antipatiko.bastos na manyakis pa.angal niya.”teka niligtas kita..sagot agad ng lalaki.hindi ka pla marunong lumangoy..ngumiti pa ang lalaki..”ala po kaseng swimming pool ang mga mahihirap tulad ko.sagot naman ni Lyka.”teka iniiba mo ang usapan.sinong nagbihis sakin?”kabadong tanong niya.Muli na namang ngumiti ito.”Ako! para pang pinagyabang pa ito ng binata,namula ang pisngi ng dalaga..”Ikaw..”Teka Lyka patay ang ilaw nung binihisan kita saka kung birhen ka pa alam mo yun kung ginalaw kita..agad na sagot ng binata..agad nawala ang galit ng dalaga.tama ang binata ala naman siyang kakaibang naramdaman kundi ang masarap matulog sa kuwarto nito dahil airon,at sobrang lambot pa ng higaan.”Cge pwede ka ng bumalik sa kuwarto niyo..sabi ni Matthew.”Ok salamat.sagot nalang niya.Tinalikuran na niya ang binatang nakangiti.Siya naman nahia sa sarili..Sino ba naman siya para pagintersan ng amo..katulong lang siya.
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188 responses to “My Prince Charming – Kabanata 3”
November 1, 2009 at 3:01 pm
ganda ng story nxy chapter pls tnx po
December 16, 2009 at 1:28 pm
wow………..so nice naman ng novela mo.kaya lng nkkbtin. just wana say,more power 2 u and GOD BLESS.
December 17, 2009 at 3:53 pm
nxt chpter poh………..tnx…….
December 18, 2009 at 5:21 pm
…
i love the story…u know you i realy touch in the last portion of the story when the mother of lyka….
tpos nakakainlove ang story sana mainlove na c matthew kay lyka…
sana mayroon pang karugtong ang kwento…
sana mayroon….
January 30, 2010 at 2:10 pm
ui pwede next chapter namn..eessh kakabitin..pleasee publish niyo na next chapter nito..tnx po and more powers :]
February 17, 2010 at 1:17 pm
Pls…sana po may kasunod na siyang chapter,,,it’s been months past,,,,pls….i like the story…. THANK YOU….hoping for the next CHAPTERS…. more power to the author…
February 22, 2010 at 7:00 pm
nakakabitin naman yung kwento,,,ang tagal naman ng karugtong…….pero grabe ang ganda ah………….hmmmmmmmmmm
March 4, 2010 at 2:09 pm
such a nice story,,, kaso!!!1 maraming mali specially sa words na ginamit…..
March 9, 2010 at 7:01 pm
neXt ChaPter !!
Pls…
Thanx…
March 21, 2010 at 2:23 pm
:NAbitin Ako..
March 27, 2010 at 10:57 pm
kniklig nco kaso nkakabtin nman..
ang gling ni0 nman.. .
please publish ni0 np0 ung next chpter. ..
alm k0 p0 mrmi n ang na-eexcite..
m0re p0wer sau..
March 29, 2010 at 7:35 pm
grabe sobrang ganda nitong story na ito kaya lang nakakabitin basahin kasi wala pa yung ibang kabanata……. kailan kaya ito masusundan?
March 31, 2010 at 1:40 am
na san na yong next chapter????i publish na,,marami nang nabbtin oh at isa na ko doon…
good luck and more powers!!
April 2, 2010 at 3:15 pm
hmm bitin kailan next????
April 16, 2010 at 4:17 pm
shit ang ganda..sana my next chapter pa tu..last 2009 ko pa tu inaabangan pewo untill now la pwin ung next chapter♥
April 16, 2010 at 4:19 pm
if ever my next chapter na please pki email nman ako fazhionizta1988@yahoo.com or pkimessage ako s fb fazhionizta_mish@yahoo.com thanks♥
April 18, 2010 at 7:24 pm
April 19, 2010 at 6:06 am
ang ganda nman ng nobela kaya lng sana may karugtong pa kasi nakakabitin talaga…basta masasabi ko more power to continue your work
April 23, 2010 at 5:07 pm
next chapter. . .naman po nakakbitin po kasi salamat. .
May 2, 2010 at 12:02 pm
bkit till now wala pa rin yung next chap??
matutuloy pa ba ito?? (sana)
wait ko parin po,,,,
tnx
June 5, 2010 at 10:05 am
…asan na ung next chapter?….badtrip naman….kung alam ko lang na bitin di ko na binasa…:)…..hinintay ko na lang sana na matapos bago ako nagstart…hehehe….plz….parang awa mo na…i-publish mo na ng buo….
July 3, 2010 at 3:33 pm
please..please.. post the next chapters…we are waiting for all of those.
thanx!!
July 3, 2010 at 3:51 pm
oi guys!,,,’wag nalang tayong mag reklamo..
ang mabuti pa, pagtutulungan nalang nating matapos ‘tong novel na ‘to…hehehe
o,sinong gustong gumawa sa chapter 4?
aq,sa chapter 5!!!
o,kayo??????
July 7, 2010 at 4:58 pm
Ok naman ung kwento kaso bitin xa…nasan na ung kabanata 4?
July 8, 2010 at 9:29 am
nice,,,,,
July 12, 2010 at 12:03 am
ang gnda naman..
kaso naka2bitin..
ahe…
sna mapost nah yung kabanata 4 pra mabasa kuh nah…
ahe…
July 12, 2010 at 5:25 pm
shems! ganda ng story. nakakabitin naman kc. pls lang. ituloy nio na. cant wait for it.
July 20, 2010 at 1:10 pm
ang ganda ng mga novels, kaya lang bitin ^_^ more power!!!
August 20, 2010 at 2:38 pm
ok na sana kaso nga tlgang bitin..
gnda ng simula poe..
i like it..ka2inlove kc,..hehe
November 1, 2009 at 11:22 pm
next chapter poh.. kkabitin ung story.. ang ganda,,,
November 1, 2009 at 11:25 pm
most of the story ang ganda.. thanks poh sa writer nang story na 2.. sana pagpa2loy nyo pa poh ang pagsulat nang nkaka inspire na story..
November 1, 2009 at 11:26 pm
pls poh next chapter na.. keep it up!!!
November 2, 2009 at 7:58 pm
ayy bitin..nxt po plzz..tnx
November 4, 2009 at 10:47 pm
nxt chpter!!! hehehe…..exciting ang ganda nung kwento…. umpisa plang ang ganda ganda na !!!! huhuhuh…
November 7, 2009 at 7:52 am
next chapter PLEASE !
November 7, 2009 at 11:14 am
ur story is nyz!!!!!
November 7, 2009 at 2:19 pm
ang ganda…wala akong masabi sana happy ang ending kaya pakisundan po agad ha?? please!!!
November 8, 2009 at 5:51 pm
ang ganda nakakakilig wala akong msabi bitin po excited na po ako kung ano na ang susunod na mangyayari
November 8, 2009 at 9:17 pm
bonggaxios sa ganda kakabitin sana magawa na ung sunod haaaay kinulang ako dun buti nalang na kita ko ang website na ito new mem palang ako kainlove!kaya lang loveless ako sana naman gumawa kayo ng story na ako ang bida plllzzzzz!tnx more power!godblees!
November 9, 2009 at 6:11 pm
paki-publish na po next episode kasi ang kinikilig na ako sa magiging ending
alam ko my gusto si matthew kay lyka!! i love it!!
November 10, 2009 at 2:12 pm
NEXT EPISODE PLS!!!
November 10, 2009 at 7:22 pm
naks namn ang ganda ng story sana my kasonood agad….
November 10, 2009 at 9:30 pm
naku!…naks nmn…ganda ng story!
kea lng nbitin nmn aq…wla bng kab.4 2…pls…pkibkis lng powh tnx….
November 11, 2009 at 7:25 pm
..ganda ng story…I really like it…
..pero how sad namatay ung nanay nya,..=(
..pero nbitin aq..haha…
..can’t wait for the next chapter..
..ayieee..
November 11, 2009 at 7:47 pm
all i can say is, “mganda tong nobela na’to.” kindly finish publishing this novel.nakakakilig..pls pki post na po lhat ng chapters..keep on writing m0re n0vels.
November 14, 2009 at 10:44 am
awtza nakakaiyak ung sa nanay nya
…. pro nice sotyr po…
November 14, 2009 at 12:47 pm
maganda po ang story…. wag po kaung magagalit sa sasabihin q ha? kung pwede po sana s mga susunod n mga chapters e, paki ayos po ung pagkaka-align at paglalagay ng space s bawat paragraph kasi po nakakaduling basahin e… kung pwede po ay ihiwalay ninyo ung mga dialogs or ung mga conversations ng mga tauhan sa paragraph upang maintindihan…atsaka ung spellings po… wag po ninyo sanang masyadong madaliin ung pagtatype…
sana po hindi kau mgalit…. gusto ko lang pong magsuggest para maging mas maganda ung story at para maintindihan ng readers….
April 16, 2010 at 8:01 pm
know wat? ur ryt.,i agree w/ u..nkakalito tlaga.
i never thought dat guyz lyk u wud b reading diz page.,jeje..
no offense meant.
November 14, 2009 at 12:48 pm
by the way, paki post po agad ung next chapters…..
November 14, 2009 at 7:31 pm
Ang ganda po ng story….nakakainlove.Pakipost po agad ang next chapter.
November 15, 2009 at 5:20 pm
nakakakilig naman..,.,ang ganda aabangan ko po.. ung next na chapter
November 16, 2009 at 4:35 am
please…please can u upload the next one. maganda ag story nakakabitin naman… please….thank u sooo much.
November 17, 2009 at 1:57 pm
please post next chapter
November 19, 2009 at 8:24 pm
sna p0hh.. i upload nio nah ung nxt chap.. nbitin kmi eehh..hahaha…!! nyz story pohh… keep it up…!!
November 19, 2009 at 9:38 pm
waaaa!!!
nakakakilig naman
sana may nxt chapter na^^
November 20, 2009 at 4:20 pm
i like the story, nakaka inlove, nxt chapter pls. tnx
November 20, 2009 at 5:15 pm
next chapter na po
November 20, 2009 at 10:20 pm
this week masusundan na yan……..!!!!!!! wait lang tau
November 21, 2009 at 11:11 am
ang ganda poh ………nxt chapter pohhhhhhh……………….
kakabitin poh eh jejeej..
November 21, 2009 at 6:09 pm
great storrrry ,,,,,more plz.
November 26, 2009 at 4:02 pm
kelan poh ilalathala ang nxt chapter??? excited na poh kami ng fren q na bumasa…
bitin huhuhuhuh
sana bukas may nx chapter nah….
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease????
November 28, 2009 at 1:13 pm
plsssssssssssssssssssss! nxt chapter na po
November 28, 2009 at 1:14 pm
bitin na bitin na po ako sa story mukhang nakaka inlove
November 30, 2009 at 10:32 am
pls pls pls
next chapter naman oh…
ang ganda ng story eh…
grabehhhh….
plagi ako dito sa cite nyo…
hooooooooooooo…
kakakilig,,,,,
December 1, 2009 at 1:58 pm
next chapter pls ganda ng story araw araw ako nakavist dito sa site di ka ba naaawa sa mga fans mo pls
December 1, 2009 at 3:26 pm
sana maituloy pa itong story na to, maganda pa naman
December 3, 2009 at 1:56 pm
Ang ganda ng story sana ipublish nyo na ung next chapter…Please
December 7, 2009 at 1:47 pm
bat po ang tagal ng next chapter?
December 7, 2009 at 8:06 pm
..xna mgkroon nah ng kabanta 4 and so on..ang ganda… i lUv it…
December 13, 2009 at 9:49 pm
nasan na po ung nxt chap …????
parang ang tgal na ng nxt chap,…???
December 16, 2009 at 7:53 pm
bitin talaga ako sa story,sana nxt chapter na.ang tgal nman……
December 17, 2009 at 11:49 am
yeah.,ibigay nyo na ung nxt chap.,ang ganda na story tapos binitin nyo….ano ba yan.,!!!
December 18, 2009 at 12:13 pm
nxtz pls……………….tnx.
December 18, 2009 at 11:53 pm
..ganda ng story… kya lng bitin… nxt. chapter… plz..
December 20, 2009 at 6:23 pm
Maam Tesmarie,,December na poh pro wala prin ung next chapter…hindi pa rin po ba ninyo natapos ang ang susunod na chapter?pls poh paki post agad….
)
December 21, 2009 at 9:18 pm
bakit ganun nakakabitin ..wait ko po yung next nito n_n
December 23, 2009 at 10:34 am
awwwww..wala pa rin po ung next..
lahat ng story nabasa ko na po…kaya pa post na po ng next chapter..like ko malaman wat magiging plan ni lyka..
tnx po..
December 27, 2009 at 11:36 am
ang ganda namn …. sna matapos na ang next chapter!!
I LUVEE it…
December 27, 2009 at 3:10 pm
kailan pa ang kabanata 3…
gusto na malaman akong ano ang nangyari..hahaha
please…..
December 27, 2009 at 11:07 pm
nxt.chapter pls hihi ganda nun story .
December 30, 2009 at 9:27 am
nxt chapter na plz….
excited na ka c ako…
gnda tlaga ng s2ry kahit
kahit pabalik- balik ako cge basa n2..
ndi nakakasawa….
hihih…
TCA & GBU
January 2, 2010 at 10:18 am
hello po sa writer
kelan po next posting neto?
ang cute kasi eh
new year gift niyo na lang po sa amin
January 7, 2010 at 12:46 am
ang cute nmn ng story….next chapter plz…..
January 9, 2010 at 12:00 pm
ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy…i thot complete na..bitin tuloy…may gulay..
January 9, 2010 at 11:10 pm
….na bitin ako…pati luha ko…luv it…
January 14, 2010 at 12:14 pm
!!!!!BITIN,,,,,,,,,,NEXT EPISODE PLZ……..
January 14, 2010 at 5:26 pm
it’s 2010 already,wala pa rin…………lalagnatin na talaga ako sa kahihintay.
January 17, 2010 at 1:38 pm
Kelan po yung next chapter e publish…
Ganda po nang story.
Hanga po ako sa writer.
Keep up the good work.
January 18, 2010 at 6:58 pm
hi!!poh,
Ang ganda talaga na ginawa mong story pro nakakabitin naman….next chapter plz…..
January 24, 2010 at 9:39 pm
uhm.. excuse me… bkit po ang tgal ng next chapter??? isang taon na yan ah…. can u post the next chapter immediately??? thanks
January 24, 2010 at 9:40 pm
by the way, I like your story
January 26, 2010 at 2:01 pm
i like the story..hope ma post na ung next chapter. thanks.
January 29, 2010 at 7:05 pm
ang ganda ng nobela mo..
kco nkakabitin basahin..
sna poh mapost na poh ung next chapter..
thanks..
January 31, 2010 at 11:57 pm
excited naku sa sussunod na kanata, pls lang now na
February 6, 2010 at 8:26 pm
ganda. i’ll wait for the next chapter.! \m/ you rock.
February 8, 2010 at 2:11 pm
ooooaaw!.. asan n ung continuation nito..
bitin nman.. ooh nyehehe
! lykd 8… nxt chapter pls…
February 9, 2010 at 10:57 pm
hi!! naks! ganda talaga ng story. kaka-in love…
i’ll wait for the next chapter…
i like it…!!!!
thank you…
February 10, 2010 at 7:39 pm
like it kso bitin ang story…..
can you post the next chapter///…. ??
thank you!!!
February 10, 2010 at 7:45 pm
wow so nice talaga
hintay ako sa nxt chapter
hehehe
inlove
na ako
hehehe
………GBU………….
February 13, 2010 at 11:18 am
gnda ng s2ry……… =) kilig 2 d bones….. =D
February 15, 2010 at 11:21 am
asan n poh krugtong, nk2bitin nman…
Cute ng love story…
I’ll look forward n mbsa ang nxt chapter…
Tanx….
February 20, 2010 at 2:50 am
nkakabitin nmn un story… sana mabasa ko n un karugtong!!!!!!!! ganda ng story po… pramis!
February 26, 2010 at 4:58 pm
sana mo bilsan ng pag update ganda po kaxe he!
February 27, 2010 at 2:35 pm
kkabitin
)
February 27, 2010 at 2:36 pm
…sna phoe ma post na ung nxt chapter..!!!
February 27, 2010 at 9:42 pm
nice story =)
nxt chapter pls..
March 1, 2010 at 7:26 am
ay ang bitin jejjej, ang ganda naman ng story next chapter pls
March 1, 2010 at 1:44 pm
shet naman araw-araw ko ino-open 2 wala
paring update!!shet tagala!
March 1, 2010 at 4:46 pm
Ang ganda ng story kya lang bitin parang y0ng st0ry na ginagawa ni lyka. .Nxt chapter p0h plz. .Tnx
March 10, 2010 at 10:47 am
nka2iniz…. nabitin akoh|@!! publish u na po ung nxt chapter…,
i’ll waiy,\**** promiz
March 12, 2010 at 7:38 pm
wew” naman.. mag iisang taon na.. ala parin..
sufah.. kakabitin.. asan napo?
March 14, 2010 at 6:16 pm
HMm … i like the story its cute kaso lng nabitin ako ……i hope ma publish ang story na to!!!!! SANA SA SUSUNOD PAKI AYOS ANG PAG TYPE SA MGA WORDS;./,./
March 18, 2010 at 6:54 am
lagi namang bitin………
March 18, 2010 at 9:39 pm
ang tagal naman po ng nxt chapter…………… kailan po kaya maipapupblish ang nxt chapter nito?
March 22, 2010 at 10:10 pm
nxt chapter na pho..bitin =(
March 24, 2010 at 3:46 pm
nxt chapter hahahahaha ang gnda
March 24, 2010 at 11:16 pm
kelan poh ba mababasa ang next chapter…? nakakabitin!!
March 25, 2010 at 10:11 pm
Hi.. just wanna say i really like your novel.. i’ll wait for chapter 3.. hope it wil be publish as soon as possible.. Keep up the good work!
March 26, 2010 at 5:21 pm
wla n pong next chapter?
kkbitin ang story, ganda p naman…
next chapter pls…
March 26, 2010 at 8:18 pm
ang ganda ng story kSo naBitin ako….i realy like the story!!!!!!yan kc ang gus2 q eh……mahilig rin aq gumawa ng nObela….kaso students pa d2 ang girl First LOve kasi SA HIgh school……..thank you
March 26, 2010 at 8:19 pm
ahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ang ganda na sana kaso……..nabitin talaga aq………
March 27, 2010 at 11:13 am
.an6 6anda 6anda tala6a n6 kwento na yan. !
March 28, 2010 at 1:05 am
OMG!!!! i love the story!!!!this is the first time that i read a pocketbook story sa internet!!and gabi gabi ako puyat dahil dito!!!!!MORE POWER!!!ANG GALING MONG WRITER!!!!HOPE WE COULD MEET SOMEDAY!!!!
March 28, 2010 at 6:16 pm
Yah, you’re right girl!
I’m also a fan of tesmarie…
Hope that the next chapter will be publish….
Nabibitin na aq.,, wondering what will be the next thing to happen,,,
Sana ma publish na,,,,,
March 29, 2010 at 1:40 am
♥♥♥ayy!!nakabitin amn poh..
zna mpublish n nextchpter…♥♥♥
March 31, 2010 at 12:13 am
wow! ganda ng story…
kailan po ipupublish yung next chaprter???
sana sa next chapter okay na ung alignment
at tska hindi na nkakaduling….
it is really a great story….
April 6, 2010 at 1:29 am
kailan nyo po ipa-publish ung nxt chapter?
nkakabitin po kc…………..but ang gnda ng story ………….
April 8, 2010 at 9:28 pm
asan na po ung next chapter? can’t wait po kasi anganda ng story hope you’ll publish it soon..:)
April 10, 2010 at 2:44 pm
san na un ksunod?? awtzz .. kkbitin .. ahahaha ..,
April 13, 2010 at 11:26 pm
Damn It! sobrang tagal ng next chapter ha!!
* KUNG SINO MAN ANG AUTHOR NITO PWEDENG PAKI-BILIS-BILISAN NAMAN UNG PAGPO-POST. MARAMING NAGHIHINTAY NG SUSUNOD NA CHAPTER EH!!!
un lng…
April 16, 2010 at 8:09 pm
nakakabitin naman.,sayang.
d story was so nice.
i really do appreciate it.,i hope d nxt chapter wil b post as soon as possible.
2 d author: hoping dat d words weren’t shortened.,naging text style na kasi eh.
nakakalitong basahin.,no offense meant huh’.
sayang, nakulangan talaga kami sa story.
April 17, 2010 at 8:20 pm
NEXT CHAPTER
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
TAGAL NAH KME NGAWAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
April 22, 2010 at 3:48 pm
wla pa bang nxt chapter?
tagal naman po.,sayang talaga.
April 29, 2010 at 12:48 pm
Next chapter pls., ang ganda naman po ng kwento nakakabitin
))
May 3, 2010 at 11:46 am
wa…nbitin aq…nxt chapter plssss………….ang gnda n eh
May 3, 2010 at 5:23 pm
Hay nabitin naman ako sa story mo.. Please naman ohhhh yung kabanata 4 naman????????
May 3, 2010 at 5:24 pm
Wala pa bah???????
May 4, 2010 at 4:40 pm
grabieh.. last year pa 2 ha!!!
hope na malagay na po ninyu ang next chapter!!!
May 5, 2010 at 3:42 am
Hmm?kailan ang nxt chapt.?parng tagal la pang kasunod. Pls.
May 5, 2010 at 4:47 pm
next chapter plss…im so eager to read nah…..
May 5, 2010 at 4:49 pm
ouch!!!!nakakabitin nman..sayang ang tagal nang kasunod..
May 6, 2010 at 2:38 pm
-=-toinkz bat ngay bitin aman oh…..next please!!!!!!! luhv it….
May 8, 2010 at 8:04 pm
wow,,kakakilig nmN,,,hahay,,nko
sana my krugtong na,,,
May 12, 2010 at 12:13 pm
sayang naman.. ang btitn.. kelan mo irerealease ang kabanta 4??
May 13, 2010 at 10:55 pm
next chapter please?
May 14, 2010 at 4:35 pm
nice story..kayah lng, daming wrong spelling, wrong grammar at yong paragraph hindi pang pocketbooks, masyadong mahaba..tsaka, nkakabitin..sanah tapusin nyo ang story ni lyka and matthew..tc!
May 21, 2010 at 8:41 pm
nakakabitin at saka ok na rin kung maraming maling grammar o spelling man kung gusto mo,angie ay ikaw na ang mag tama kapag nabasa mo na yung mga kasunod pang mangyayari(kung may mga wrong spelling at grammar pa rin) basta ay nagandahan tayong lahat sa kanyamg nilathala…sana nga makapag-publish na ang author nito ng susunod pang mga magagandang kahintay-hintay na pangyayari….aabangan ko po iyon thank you…. more great power to the author and blesssings!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
May 25, 2010 at 1:39 am
ANG ganda ng story!!!!!!!
kaso bitin…….. kaya sana pk bilisan un
chapter 4!!!!!!!!
May 26, 2010 at 10:44 am
ang tagal nmn ng kasunod…sna po lumabas n un..ka2bitin eh..
May 30, 2010 at 2:56 pm
bkit ang tgal nman po ng karugtong…………..nkkbitin eh!!
June 3, 2010 at 12:20 pm
wala pa din next chap?? kelan kaya?
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June 3, 2010 at 1:12 pm
san n po ung kabanata 4.nabitin ako ganda p nmn..
June 5, 2010 at 10:07 am
…asan na ang next chapter?,…..hehehe…..asan na?…publish it plsssssssssss…
June 5, 2010 at 11:17 am
wala na ata kadugtong to…or di pa tapos?…last year pa 2 ehh….
June 5, 2010 at 8:50 pm
maganda!
June 7, 2010 at 12:29 am
it’s almost half a year since the last chapter is published… I hope the next chapter will be sooner or later come out…. how interesting is the story… i want to see more of this… tnx!!
June 11, 2010 at 4:47 pm
Guys….. Hindi ang author dapat sisihin… ang Admen kasi ang bagal-bagal mag review…
Hindi nila alam na naiinip na tayo sa kahihintay…..
June 12, 2010 at 9:47 am
h!community!..ala pa rin bang balita ky tesmarie?..
June 12, 2010 at 9:21 pm
gus2 q i2ng basahin dhil mraming nagsa2v s akn n mgnda dw i2 kya lng pnu q i2 ba2sahin qng d nmn continues ung storya at paano q ba2lik-balikan i2ng site n i2 qng konti lng ung storya
June 13, 2010 at 9:58 am
haayy..panu ba yan macontact c tesmarie..?kaloka nman cia..!iniwan sa ere..
June 29, 2010 at 2:52 pm
next chepter po kelan?
July 3, 2010 at 3:42 pm
to the author:
the more you keep your readers wait for the next chapters of your story,the more they get uninterested with it. so please, if can’t make it to finish the whole story,just let your readers know.
July 3, 2010 at 3:53 pm
oi guys!,,,’wag nalang tayong mag reklamo..
ang mabuti pa, pagtutulungan nalang nating matapos ‘tong novel na ‘to…hehehe
o,sinong gustong gumawa sa chapter 4?
aq,sa chapter 5!!!
o,kayo??????
July 3, 2010 at 10:59 pm
sana po matapos na ung nxt chapter plx,↲i love it eh ang ganda ng st0ry
July 6, 2010 at 11:19 am
grabe ganda pero ang lungkot kasi namatay ang nanay nya
July 6, 2010 at 11:20 am
pero nakaka kilig antay ko ang kasunod ha bait ni matthew
July 7, 2010 at 10:22 am
uuuuuuuuuuuuyyyyyyyyyyyyyy asan na ang chapter 4
July 7, 2010 at 10:23 am
kabitin na man akala q dito ang kabanata 4 asan na pls na man o nabitin kc me eh
July 8, 2010 at 11:22 am
ang ganda ng storyaaaaaa…….kasa wala pang wakassssss…
July 13, 2010 at 10:33 am
ang tagal nman ng kasunod….dalian nyo naman ipost yung next nyan…nakakabitin maganda pa naman..dami ng nagrereklamo ei,,,woi…asan na ung next…!!!!!!!>_<
July 14, 2010 at 10:21 am
Sana my chapter 4 na… Ang Tagal ko ng nghihintay.. Nkakainip… Ganda pa nmn ng story nkakakilig… Tnx hintayin po nmin ung next chapter… Slamat and god bless…
July 19, 2010 at 9:14 am
san na ung next chapter????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
July 19, 2010 at 7:08 pm
nice..! kxo btin p’ nxt chapter po plsss…..’
mkhang mganda ung story’ exkayted n q s su2nod n chapter,
July 20, 2010 at 1:11 pm
ang ganda ng kwento.. nakaka excite..
July 24, 2010 at 1:12 pm
Yay bitin nga!!sayang ganda ng story ahekz
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August 2, 2010 at 9:14 am
NICE..but bitin.
..wala nn next chapter?
2010 na ngayun…..
next chapter pls…………….
August 3, 2010 at 1:51 pm
nice…story…
pero super bitin wala nba nxt chapter nito…pa-post nmn po..thanks
August 4, 2010 at 9:32 pm
ang ganda….
kaso nga lang bitin!!!!!!next chapter please!!!!!
August 6, 2010 at 10:58 pm
ayoko mgbasa ng mabibitin lng ako…. bka d ako makatulog… =(
August 7, 2010 at 5:14 am
kakalokaaaaaaa…., kailan ba ipa-publish ang next chapter??? pg nagunaw na ang mundo????? ang tagal tagal….. halos 4 months na akong naghihintay wala parin ang chapter 4…..
August 10, 2010 at 7:05 pm
really100x gud story.. i can’t wait for next chapter? when we gonna have it plz:)
August 13, 2010 at 3:42 pm
Kelan po i-publish ung continuation…..can’t wait to see it!
August 14, 2010 at 1:15 pm
nakakainip e2′ehh… tagal na nito… d pa nadagdagan… hayzzz… kelan poh ba e2 nakokompleto…??
August 18, 2010 at 8:09 pm
napaknice ung story kya lang nakakabitin……….. gud luck at ska sna e continue nyo pa ung story…….
August 24, 2010 at 4:00 pm
pls. continue the story.. the story is nice.. it’s almost a year since it was publishe it in this site.. to the writer.. pls…continue..
August 24, 2010 at 4:06 pm
pls. continue.. the story is nice…
it’s almost a year since you started to pulished it on the web.. pls, continue to write because you inspires me to write.. it is also my passion to write but i’m afraid because people may not be happy with it.. as for you, you see, many people (readers) wants to read it.. so pls pls. continue.. thanks a lot more power!!!
August 28, 2010 at 9:51 pm
hey!!!werz da nxt chapter pls…
mag wawanyear na poh eh ala pah..
xayang nmn kng uala un…
update it sooner huh!..salamat!
August 28, 2010 at 9:53 pm
hey..waz up???ala p rn B???
so nice story p nmn…ahmpt.
nabitn aqh!
plz continue…